Monday 5th September 2016
We are learning how to write a persuasive piece of writing.
The Three Little Pigs
I agree, The wolf is the real victim in this story. In this story I’m going to show you evidence that will tell you why the wolf is the real victim.
The wolf is the real victim to my story, the wolf had a question to ask the little pigs and the little pigs ignored him. So….. that's why the wolf huffed and puffed their houses down.
The three little pigs were being bullies to the wolf.
The wolf asked a question politely but still the pigs didn’t listen to him the pigs are bullies, they got cheeky, silly and were being annoying to the wolf.
A couple minutes later the wolf came back, so the wolf went down the chimney and landed in a pot. The first reaction I would do is to jump out of the water.
In conclusion, the three little pigs were getting cheeky and silly to the wolf. The wolf might of been angry about the pigs being cheeky and silly.
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